Teo, the sense of space you got here is impressive, and I like the way the dark marks seem to be coming forward from the lighter background field. I'm guessing your tool was something hard and linear, like a chopstick (only smaller). I imagine you used this tool to make stamp-like impressions, to swipe like a brush, and to let the ink drop from. As far as the composition goes, I like the centrifugal thrust, but I think things get a little too heavy on the left. It might help to put some larger strokes and shapes on the right to balance things out.
I like the dark, radial lines in this, they make it look like an action scene and give it a sense of depth. I wish the lighter tones in the background could expand on that depth in some way. I think the character of the mark is really fun.
Teo, the sense of space you got here is impressive, and I like the way the dark marks seem to be coming forward from the lighter background field. I'm guessing your tool was something hard and linear, like a chopstick (only smaller). I imagine you used this tool to make stamp-like impressions, to swipe like a brush, and to let the ink drop from. As far as the composition goes, I like the centrifugal thrust, but I think things get a little too heavy on the left. It might help to put some larger strokes and shapes on the right to balance things out.
ReplyDeleteI like the dark, radial lines in this, they make it look like an action scene and give it a sense of depth. I wish the lighter tones in the background could expand on that depth in some way. I think the character of the mark is really fun.
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