Teo, the pattern here is very interesting and effective. I definitely get a sense of optical blending, and your skin tones are quite convincing as such. While the yellow and blue background squares do create optical blending, I might prefer to see some more subtle pockets of different color in there -- just so it's not the same color scheme for all those squares (which tends to flatten things out make the squares look like tiles). You took a very interesting approach to seeing that the edges stayed soft. I think it's effective here, even if, strictly speaking, it violates the logic of the unit-by-unit approach to the composition (in other words, what happens around your edges divides the smallest triangular units into non-solid areas). Great job, overall -- a very dynamic image.
I really love this. Even though your squares are pretty large in size I do get a sense of optical blending from the drawing. I think a bit more color variation in the face would make it more interesting. Maybe some cooler tones?
I really like the softness of the edges in your piece. The only thing I might change would be to add a little green in the face to contrast the red and to add shadows.
I think this is probably my favorite piece of yours with regards to color. I think the triangular/box pattern is great and I think you did a really good job with the background. I get a real feeling of depth.
Teo, the pattern here is very interesting and effective. I definitely get a sense of optical blending, and your skin tones are quite convincing as such. While the yellow and blue background squares do create optical blending, I might prefer to see some more subtle pockets of different color in there -- just so it's not the same color scheme for all those squares (which tends to flatten things out make the squares look like tiles). You took a very interesting approach to seeing that the edges stayed soft. I think it's effective here, even if, strictly speaking, it violates the logic of the unit-by-unit approach to the composition (in other words, what happens around your edges divides the smallest triangular units into non-solid areas). Great job, overall -- a very dynamic image.
ReplyDeleteI really love this. Even though your squares are pretty large in size I do get a sense of optical blending from the drawing. I think a bit more color variation in the face would make it more interesting. Maybe some cooler tones?
ReplyDeleteI think you really got the optical blending down here. The colors you picked and the way you decided to divide the piece works really well.
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I really like the softness of the edges in your piece. The only thing I might change would be to add a little green in the face to contrast the red and to add shadows.
ReplyDeleteI think this is probably my favorite piece of yours with regards to color. I think the triangular/box pattern is great and I think you did a really good job with the background. I get a real feeling of depth.
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