Madi, my favorite part of this drawing is the sky; I can see so much complex color in there. I also like the softness of the whole thing. It reminds me of Paris on a rainy afternoon. I do think, however, that you could have much more color throughout. I'd love to see some oranges in the shadow areas to make the blue more complex. And why not try blending in some reds and greens in certain places. It doesn't have to be a lot. It just has to be enough that we don't keep seeing the same kinds of blue all over the composition. Finally, I'm not sure why you left the lower right edge untouched. To me this makes it look unfinished. I'd love to see the color taken all the way to all four edges.
While this drawing could use more complex colors, the marks in this drawing are really amazing to look at. The blending is very soft and it all has a cohesive mood to it. I think the bottom right corner could use a small bit more blending.
Madi, my favorite part of this drawing is the sky; I can see so much complex color in there. I also like the softness of the whole thing. It reminds me of Paris on a rainy afternoon. I do think, however, that you could have much more color throughout. I'd love to see some oranges in the shadow areas to make the blue more complex. And why not try blending in some reds and greens in certain places. It doesn't have to be a lot. It just has to be enough that we don't keep seeing the same kinds of blue all over the composition. Finally, I'm not sure why you left the lower right edge untouched. To me this makes it look unfinished. I'd love to see the color taken all the way to all four edges.
ReplyDeleteWhile this drawing could use more complex colors, the marks in this drawing are really amazing to look at. The blending is very soft and it all has a cohesive mood to it. I think the bottom right corner could use a small bit more blending.
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