I really love your shading! It shows where the lightsource is and helps to better break apart the objects. I would continue more lines outwards like you had started to do in the third image and maybe add more around the flower petals so they stick out better!
Your work shows the great value, it makes me can easily tell where the light comes and this also helps the viewers to recognize what the main objects are. I would suggest adding more space in the background so mix with objects together.
Celia, the way you've divided up the objects and rendered them as faceted is terrific. Since the bear's face is such a key component (everyone looks for faces in things!), you may want to make another quick drawing of just the bear's face from several more angles. Also, you haven't done much to address the space here. Before you begin your collage I hope you'll go in and break the space up into facets in a way that is consistent with the figures.
yo these flowers are very pretty. I think all you need to do is extend the shapes into the background so that the flower are integrated well. (I think the top right is my favorite because the bear looks very cute) -Kaayla
These objects are divided up very nicely. I think you can go one step further and really differentiate the values since there is a lot of white shapes next to each other. And of course a background that the objects can diffuse into would also be nice. - Sidney
I really love your shading! It shows where the lightsource is and helps to better break apart the objects. I would continue more lines outwards like you had started to do in the third image and maybe add more around the flower petals so they stick out better!
ReplyDeleteYour work shows the great value, it makes me can easily tell where the light comes and this also helps the viewers to recognize what the main objects are. I would suggest adding more space in the background so mix with objects together.
ReplyDeleteCelia, the way you've divided up the objects and rendered them as faceted is terrific. Since the bear's face is such a key component (everyone looks for faces in things!), you may want to make another quick drawing of just the bear's face from several more angles. Also, you haven't done much to address the space here. Before you begin your collage I hope you'll go in and break the space up into facets in a way that is consistent with the figures.
ReplyDeleteyo these flowers are very pretty.
ReplyDeleteI think all you need to do is extend the shapes into the background so that the flower are integrated well.
(I think the top right is my favorite because the bear looks very cute)
-Kaayla
These objects are divided up very nicely. I think you can go one step further and really differentiate the values since there is a lot of white shapes next to each other. And of course a background that the objects can diffuse into would also be nice. - Sidney
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