Pan, I'm really impressed with the way this piece came out. I love the frames and dagger, and the whole presentation is quite striking. As far as the drawings go, I find the one on the left stronger than the one on the right. I know a lot was said about this today by your classmates (the text on the right not following the curve of the coin, etc.); the only things I would add are that the head feels too big for the coin on the right, and the coin itself doesn't seem to sit perfectly vertically on the print. These things would be easy to change, and I encourage you to do so. This is such a strong piece overall -- I'm so glad you rethought your original idea!
Pan, I'm really impressed with the way this piece came out. I love the frames and dagger, and the whole presentation is quite striking. As far as the drawings go, I find the one on the left stronger than the one on the right. I know a lot was said about this today by your classmates (the text on the right not following the curve of the coin, etc.); the only things I would add are that the head feels too big for the coin on the right, and the coin itself doesn't seem to sit perfectly vertically on the print. These things would be easy to change, and I encourage you to do so. This is such a strong piece overall -- I'm so glad you rethought your original idea!
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